Kia ora tatou katoa
Ko kakepuku te maunga
Ko waipa te Awa
Ko Manipoto te iwi
No Te kuiti ahau
Ko Natarasha toku mama
Ko Rodrick toku papa
Ko Triton toku ingoa
Tena Koutou Tena koutou Tena koutou kotoa
This may seem weird, but this will help us remember the elements of good writing
W for word choice
C for Conventions
S for Sentence Fluency
V for voice
O for Organization
I for Ideas
He used excellence sticking to his goal and achieving it and wining a Wimbledon cup
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On Thursday we went on the water slide, the water slide was like a half tube thing with water at the bottom and water running from the top the goal was to empty the bottom so you didn't stop and flew right over the edge.I was one of the ones who flew over ,because I had board shorts on and Jacob and a few others had cotton shorts so they didn't go that fast.
TERM 4!
TERM 4 WAS A GOOD YEAR BECAUSE THERE WAS A LOT OF HOUSE SPORTS ACTIVITY'S.AND US YEAR 8'S HAD CAMP AND THAT WAS AWESOME.
MY MIHI IN MAORI
Kia ora tatou katoaKo kakepuku te maunga
Ko waipa te Awa
Ko Manipoto te iwi
No Te kuiti ahau
Ko Natarasha toku mama
Ko Rodrick toku papa
Ko Triton toku ingoa
Tena Koutou Tena koutou Tena koutou kotoa
This may seem weird, but this will help us remember the elements of good writing
W for word choice
C for Conventions
S for Sentence Fluency
V for voice
O for Organization
I for Ideas
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He used excellence sticking to his goal and achieving it and wining a Wimbledon cup
.
On Thursday we went on the water slide, the water slide was like a half tube thing with water at the bottom and water running from the top the goal was to empty the bottom so you didn't stop and flew right over the edge.I was one of the ones who flew over ,because I had board shorts on and Jacob and a few others had cotton shorts so they didn't go that fast.
TERM 4!
TERM 4 WAS A GOOD YEAR BECAUSE THERE WAS A LOT OF HOUSE SPORTS ACTIVITY'S.AND US YEAR 8'S HAD CAMP AND THAT WAS AWESOME.